Winter Break

[Hannibal]

I ran home this evening
Cold winter winds were whipping my face
I couldn't stop you from running across my mind.
Seeing you in the snow - fading in the light.
You seemed to stand on the brink of my vision.
My desires to touch you - overcome with pain
The seering wound you burned onto my heart
Cold empty hands flowing in motion
with cold icy feet moving ever slower
Everything stops --- --- and I see you.
Standing there - shrouded in mystery
Covered in flaked snow.

You look as beautiful now, as you did then,
I want to reach you - touch you like before.
I want you to believe in me.
My tears cloud my vision and seem to carry you away
You didn't move - didn't fight the current at all
You just went away, you just let go.
My feen onw seem frozen -
as if by not moving -
They'll some how

bring

you

back.

I know you're gone - but my body longs for you
my heart burns - and my soul weeps.
Standing lost ina blizzard -
I wish i could find a home.
Because my body is no longer a home
just an empty shell - with empty dreams.

[sarafina mable]

wow, heavy and just about perfectly scripted

"My feen onw seem frozen -"

i'm assuming the 'onw' is 'now' but i don't know what 'feen' is.

these lines make me move inside:

"as if by not moving -
They'll some how

bring

you

back."

brillant!

[Hannibal]

Crap, that's what I get for not spell checking.
Feen is feet.
and onw is now.
hehehe..... I thought that the spacing of those words would help get the point across...
glad it worked [img]wink.gif[/img]